Student Examples

Third Floor
We liked the use of atmospheric strings in this opening. It matched the slow mo and created tension. Strings may be very effective in our opening.
Also, the use of Black and White flashbacks are very conventional of the genre and worked well in creating confusion and enigmas.
However, we felt it was almost too confusing with almost no continuity. Furthermore, the title at the end seemed rushed an out of place as they didn't match the titles at the beginning, and were in an unconventional order.



Re:Venge
We liked the CCTV style high angle camera work. It was like the main character was being watched. Also, the entire narrative created enigmas such as 'who is the man in the alleyway?'. Furthermore, the use of lighting to create silhouettes was very effect in concealing identity. We would like to try and use this in our film if possible.
However, there were too many shots of the suited man walking up the stairs, making it seem a little repetitive and boring. This was also added to by the repetitive music. Moreover, the unnecessary zooms used when characters were walking towards the camera took away from the professionalism.